Please advise: one magnificent sentence

Hello word fans! Can you help me with a sentence? Just one little subject, predicate, object, some punctuation, and bingo! These are from my forthcoming novel, Spy Act. I’m keen to hook a particular agent. Here are a few of my faves: please vote for one you like. Priorities are charm, wit, brains and style: a hook that makes her READ THE WHOLE BOOK FROM FRONT TO BACK IN ONE SITTING. Which one do you like?